If we don’t rebel, if we’re not physically in an active rebellion, then it’s spiritual death.” ― Chris Hedges

Monday, September 19, 2011

Dealing with the lives involved with a death in a Novel way, for Chuckyman who's back to the Front.

Extract from the 2nd part of the first Chapter of my Novel, which is a work in progress, like fossil fuels:
DELIVER US FROM INNOCENCE
A story of love and war at the genesis of a Millennium.

Sawasdee Thailand


© The Author
Don Moung airport, Bangkok. 4.45 ayem. The airport was deserted and flight information echoed up and down the empty halls. A garish yellow-green fluorescent light reflected off the pale sheen of the linoleum floor. Cleaners lingered near windows, chatting while leaning on huge V-shaped brooms.

It was still dark outside - the windows reflected the interior. David was aware of his reflection striding rapidly; he travelled light and hated waiting in line. Arriving at customs ahead of the rest of his flight, David’s addled mind was disorientated; he let his small backpack flop to the floor. Pushing his aluminium camera cases together with his foot then laying the in-flight magazine on top he sat down and smoked a cigarette as the remnants of the previous Arrival were being processed. David was hung-over and keen to stretch out on a bed.

Moments later the other passengers off his flight emerged enmasse from the walkway with a low rumble as David passed impatiently through Customs and down to the baggage rotundas.

David smiled and guffawed as he made his way through the sleepy milieu; first-time travellers never ceased to amuse him. Above the bickering and schamozzle David could here the incessant scraping of tiny wheels: the ones on the bottom of suit-cases that with the first use end up bent over, twisted and useless, just scuffing along - a hindrance to dragging 80lbs of unnecessarily, packed-in luggage. The way he'd seen some people lugging their shit across the world; bits of string and adhesive tape holding everything together and those ridiculous little identification ribbons the travel agents advise them to tie to their generic design suitcase sets. Red, blue, green and pink ribbons as far as the eye can see, Ha! There must be a squillion tons of lost clothing and personal items strewn across the tarmacs of the world by rough-enough's-good-enough baggage handlers.

After what seemed an eternity of cursing and chain-smoking his huge vinyl suitcase appeared, lolling obesely. He dragged it off and wrestled it onto his trolley - the duty-free contents settled tinkling and clinking as he laboured towards the exit. Passing nonchalantly under the big green NOTHING TO DECLARE arch - David shook his head and continued out onto the concourse, his fat suitcase bulging with what could easily qualify as commercial quantities of Johnny Walker Black Label, Australian red wines, Blue cheese and cigarettes. Contraband for Contra deals - David was a petty smuggler of sorts. On a practical level even the cheapest crappiest gift often made a negotiation schmooze through more easily than hard cash.

E.g. An illiterate village chieftain sitting cross-legged under a thatch roof in a rain cloud at three thousand feet, might not remember whether the rent being paid by the multinational corporation for the right to destroy the jungle's canopy of his tribal homeland, will increase by market rates or indexing. However, it's a for-gone' that he'll remember the ceremonial booze served and shared by the 'foreign devils' that surrounded him in a kow-towing gaggle, during the negotiations!

A deep blue caste enveloped the front of the Terminal building, the fluorescent glow from the entrance faded out into it.

Morning was smeared across the horizon - a lick of pink and orange.

A powerful waft of oven-door heat drove the pungency of Orchids, rotting trash and exhaust fumes into his nostrils, moving his hair and clothes like a bully pushing through a crowd. The putrid air was heavy with moisture - a belated end to the wet-season. Already sweating profusely as he peered into the dark grey-blue of the false dawn, David tugged at the collar of his Polo shirt and sighed as the heat pressed-in, his legs were damp inside his micro-fibre slacks.

"Yoo wan' tassi, take yoo 'otel sir?" A podgy, scruffy little man approached in a curved sweep through the sinister half-light along the edge of the fluorescence.

David had waded through the Touts in the Terminal, dodging them and their extortionate offers of taxis and sexual services to find just such a driver. On a previous trip, one particularly bilious looking and persistent creep had annoyed David into response...

"No, I don't want to 'Fakeeng' your sister, I don't care how tight her 'poosee' is, so FUCK OFF!" This closing statement turned heads.

Outside the Terminal David knew he could haggle a decent fare. He liked the small-time guys that drove the beaten-up older taxis; they were usually dishevelled creatures that smelled of motor-oil and stale booze.

Like the honest poor the world over, they grinned at the irony of it all through masks of anguished determination - a commonwealth of disappointment grasping at their souls and laughter born of empathy bonding their hearts.

By now the driver had advanced upon and was grappling with David's baggage. Attempting to carry it all at once, and tender for David's business at the same time.

"Where yoo go sir? No worry, not too much money, cheap, no problem but maybe sumsing for me, OK?"

The little guy tried to smile cheerfully - his eyes were bloodshot and his teeth were stained red from chewing Betel nut, and although all he could manage was an idiotic grin and a nervous tick, he was giving off the right vibes. David liked him.

"Come come, I tek yoo baks, no worry I hass goo' tassi, aircon, aircon!"

Straining at the bag that David wouldn't release; in a bizarre tug-of-war the driver was now rocking from foot to foot glancing nervously behind David. Continuing to resist the Driver's urging David asked him how much.

“Pom pai Bangplad, Charansanitwong, Soi Lertboon jet-sip-et, ti, Baht?” Requesting a price in Thai, to go to a specific destination, which was not a Hotel, startled the driver.

"Oi, yoo sapeek Thai, OK, Sii Loi, (400 baht) OK we go, soon t'affic no goo'!" The driver urged, as he again tugged at the bag David was holding.

“No, Soung loi –Haa sip Baht, OK.” David stood his ground for 250 Baht.

“Oi, Ok, Ok, we go now!” The driver agreed, better 250 Baht than nothing. If the independent drivers brought a fare to the Airport, they knew they only had a few precarious minutes to pick up a return fare before being given the Bum's-rush out of the Airport precinct by Cops on the take from the Touts.

Peeping around David, the Driver grimaced. One of the Touts David had palmed-off and a couple of Cops were bearing down on them.

The driver; dragging the bulging suitcase and juggling the majority of David's luggage, turned and scuttled out into the three-deep row of Hotel Limousines and a dozen sleek and shiny Meter-taxis. The Tout and the Cops were calling from behind as David followed the driver. David had what he wanted and didn't respond.
When they were safely pulling into traffic David took a look back; The senior cop, standing hands akimbo on the concourse, was boyishly thin, with a pot-belly; in his skin-tight brown uniform, peaked cap, bulky revolver and big black boots - he looked comical, like a Nazi Mickey Mouse. Comical however, these tough little brutes were not.

The temperature inside the taxi was an icy shock. Rarely did the air-conditioning work; none the less the Touts would use the facility to hustle the taxis they controlled. It wasn't until you were jammed in traffic, baking in your own juices and demanding the air-conditioning that you would be casually informed that it had broken down. Complaints went begging - "I was told it had air-conditioning"! Was invariably answered with "Yes, there, there is Aircon' " the device itself being pointed out.

The cultural anomalies inherent to explaining that merely having the device in the car was not sufficient - it has to actually operate - defied a debate of the ethics involved.

For some reason the driver couldn't explain, the new multi-million dollar Fly-Over was not available for use. As the taxi moved into the flow of the busy morning traffic David rested back onto the cold vinyl seat.

Through the driver's side passenger window David could see the sun rising, a spray of chrome-yellow rays fanning the sky and striking in silhouette with bright jagged contrasts the outer-urban-industrial skyline of Bangkok.

Leaving the freeway several minutes later and approaching an intersection shrouded in smog, the taxi slowed to the pace of the city traffic - A cityscape of dull grey skyscrapers pierced the fluffy ginger haze. Bangkok was one huge filthy traffic-jam from 6am 'til 2am every day of the year.

The driver was fiddling with the tape deck. The gaping glove compartment revealed a jumble of cheap cassette tapes - bad rip-off recordings of good artists.

"Ingliss moosik, very goo' ". A goofy betel-nut grin flashed across the Driver's face as the tape deck began to play with a pop and a squeal. The tune was The Goo Goo Dolls' - Iris. One of Sally's favourites. The Driver began humming and moaning out of tune. As the song was beginning to affect David's thoughts the tape deck squealed again and stopped. The Driver cursed and started pressing and re-pressing all the grubby prongs with polished tips protruding from the Tape-deck; the buttons appearing to have fallen from grace long ago.
The Tape deck itself was slung beneath the dashboard in a firm web and clump of telephone cable and electrical tape. When the cassette finally ejected, a tight knot of brown ribbon that was still attached to the inside of the tape deck blossomed from the cassette player. With a gleaming embarrassed face the Driver dropped the damaged cassette tugged out the rest of the tape and inserted another that he found after a quick rummage along the dashboard.

"Sony, Sony re-al one, is bery goo, no problem"! The Driver beamed as he pushed the tape into the ancient knobless Tape deck.

Lara's theme - it couldn't be worse; this was the tune Sally and he had selected for their wedding waltz, David laughed and sighed - this wasn't coincidence - someone somewhere was sticking pins into his wax effigy.

At the intersection, through the dense acrid blue haze belched up by the traffic, David could see a Cop on duty, gracefully pirouetting as he directed the traffic with large reflective gauntlets, helmet and poncho. After the long boozy stoned flight David was still dazed unfocussed and melancholy. Lara's theme ebbed across his thoughts - he gulped at the whiskey from his remaining bottle and passed it to the driver who grinned at the side of David’s head took a long swig and passed it back. David chugged down the last mouthful. A warm buzz flushed through his body, the music hummed and a moment later the scene transmogrified as they rolled through the smog passed the traffic cop.

David saw through the translucent rays of dawn; His Bride, in her wedding-dress, turning in the slow incandescent swirls of a smoke machine...the traffic lurched forward. Sullenly, David rested his head against the window.


The City of Angels loomed ahead...



TRUTH IS NOT RACIST | FACTS ARE NOT HATE

11 comments:

Anon said...

This captures the atmosphere.

'rotting trash and exhaust fumes'

'Ingliss moosik, very goo'

- Aangirfan

chuckyman said...

Thank you V. That meant a lot also.

What can I say mate? Talent and attitude in the same blog – a heady mix (grin). Keep up the good work.

veritas6464 said...

Hey Aan,...I wrote this stuff twenty years ago in a grubby, fan-room at the Peachey Guest House in Banglampoo; from my window I could see the mighty Chao Praya sliding inexorably past, at night, across the river I could see the welders working on the new High-Risers, sparks pouring down from white flashes of arc-light which sporadically illuminated the dark river silhouetting the lumbering hulks carrying logs and mountains of trash.

Thanks for the few kind words.

veritas

veritas6464 said...

Hey Chuckyman,...Your praise is always welcome, I am sorry to be so melancholy, it just seems that a world I was hood-winked into creating has not turned out to be the Utopia of love light & peace my generation was sold.

That we lose our fellow travellers in a time without any light at the end of the tunnel to encourage them as they begin their next journey, is the bitter harvest of our toxic legacy.

veritas

Timster said...

Hey V - Tom Pynchon...move over! Can't wait for the next chapter. "Morning was smeared across the horizon - a lick of pink and orange".
Wow...

veritas6464 said...

Hey Timster,...Cheers mate, it's all your fault(grin).

veritas

John Friend said...

Great stuff veritas! I'm very impressed man!

"The way he'd seen some people lugging their shit across the world;"

Good thing David (or you!) didn't see me the time I traveled to Europe. I packed like a complete donkey, and was hauling around an oversized, God awful 70s style suitcase. Looking back on it, I'm laughing my ass off!

I probably would have picked the same taxi driver that David did, too.

FYI- "Outside the Terminal David *new he could haggle a decent fare." *knew

Sorry, that was the only one I spotted. Good stuff man! You're a very talented writer!

veritas6464 said...

Hey John Friend,...Thanks man, that typo is fixed now and thanks again, I really have been scribbling this stuff for a biblical generation (20 years?) countries have literally come and gone since I started this fiasco.

This Novel is based on a lot of experiential baggage(grin) that I have accumulated and witnessed, however, David is not me, he might have been had I not been corrupted psychologically and emotionally by my Military Service, haaargh! The character of David is like many in Novel-land; more a pastiche of various people and their eccentricities, rather than the Author or any discernible individual persona.

Thanks for the w/- Comps', it's always nice to find a Mint on one's pillow.

Remember to concentrate on fighting the good fight John, everything else is baggage and superfluous accessories, I mean, really, who needs a pretty bag to carry their shaving kit in, on the front-line - hell, who needs a fucking shaving kit on the front-line:

Only men that have no respect for their nutz, go Commando! (think about it)

Oh, you can quote me on that one, Cooooooeeeee!


veritas

John Friend said...

Oh I'm concentrating on fighting the good fight my man, rest assured of that.

I'm thinking about your Commando quote, and still trying to figure it out....before I quote you, can I have you clarify what you mean?

musique said...

Cuzzin V,

Whoa! this surely brings back memories. Being born in the most populated, corrupt & congested country in the third world, I can close my eyes and imagine the sights, sounds and not to mention humidity, yikes!

If you toss me in any of those Asian countries, I would be a lost soul ...I wouldn't know what to do. I've totally forgotten how to bargain or haggle prices down, yeah ... you're allowed to hate me for that. :)

I wouldn't mind going anywhere in the world except for israhell & Thailand. Can't imagine parents selling their own young daughters to the sex industry or encouraging boys to be "lady boys". Sick bastards.

Cuzzie, will it be possible to send David off to mission in israhell? Where Dave will capture nuttyjuuku and bring him to Thailand for a special constructive surgery - nutty's mouth/lips will be relocated to his ass and his big stinky hibby ass in place of his mouth.

Hmmmm, imagine nuttyjuuhu giving a speech at the U.S. Congress after the constructive surgery - hail shitrahell!!;)

Sir Chucky, please do something about the royals ... they are alway hogging up my teevee during dinner time!

veritas6464 said...

Hey musique,...Sorry man, just found your comment here, fuck blogger. Thanks for the support, I totally agree with the nutyjoohoo surgery, perhaps we could pay one of the surgical assistants to absently leave a surgical clamp or two in his chest cavity?

veritas